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Wednesday 10 August 2011

The Jade bracelet ending.

This Is How The Jade Bracelet Suppose To End.

Suddenly words came from Ah Kow's mouth. He said "Siew May should take care of the bracelet".

"And why is that?", said Mrs. Wong as she packing their stuff and prepare to go home.

"Siew May is the one who deserved it more than I do".

"I repeat, AND WHY IS THAT? Is that because our mother was dead and you think you can simply disagree against me?  I can see you are tough enough now, mister!".

"No, i don't mean it that way. I'm sorry".

Siew May just went silent. And the conversation caught the other relatives attention.

"I believe in all of this stuff. The jade, the Qi, and our tradition." Fook Kee continued his word.

"But i think i don't deserve it."

"Explain your words, young man", said the half-boiled Mrs. Wong. She already turned red.

"In our family, I'm the black sheep. I am a lazy person. I hate to do something continuously. I even hate my job. I'm afraid I can't take care this legacy." said Ah Fook as he grabbed the bracelet hard.

"Yeah," said Siew May. "You can't even manage your own laundry."

"Your pyjamas is still on the suspension since the last three days." said one of the relatives.

"Fook Kee don't even wash the dishes after every single dinner unless Wong around to instruct him" another relative spoke out.

The other relatives began to whisper to each other. They also agreed that Ah Fook don't have a good appearance and described that he is not a good person to own the bracelet. They prefer Siew May to own that legacy because Siew May feed their ray finned mud-carp. This aquatic creature is so expensive.

 Mrs. Wong was awed by Fook Kee  generosity and she suddenly cried.

"Ok, that is very persuasive. Fook Kee is right, you deserved this much better, my daughter"said Mrs. Wong. Siew May took out her "bob-cat" face. "Mother, forgive me. I will now give this legacy to the one you had intended to inherit it." Mrs.Wong whispered as she was cooling down.

 "Hope that you, little girl, can take care this of this bracelet. I think this is what your grandma always wanted. Or probably, the bracelet chose you. You are the chosen one! Just like Anakin of the George Lucas's Star Wars! THE CHOSEN ONE!"said Fook Kee.  Mrs. Wong glanced. The other started to laugh.

So, Mrs. Wong gave it to Siew May and with a big smile. Siew May accept it.  All of the family members and relatives agrees that Siew May deserve the bracelet. "Now i got another"good" for my masak-masak." She giggled.

But Adri's ending is better.

After Mrs. Wong gave the bracelet to Fook Kee.

Suddenly unpredicted words came from Fook Kee's Mouth " You know who's really deserved this, right?". Mrs. Wong quickly starred at Siew May. But Mrs. Wong still insisted giving it to Fook Kee. "But she the one who really deserved this bracelet, also it's mother dying wish to give it to Siew May not me. Don't you want our mother to rest in peace?" after the conversation Fook Kee walk to Siew May. He handed her the bracelet and Fook Kee told Siew May to take care of the bracelet for him. Thus, He passed his responsibility to Siew May. Siew May promise to take care of the bracelet. Others was shocked by Fook Kee's decision. Fook Kee's said "it would be better this way".

Year passed, Siew May grow older and she still wore the same jade bracelet that her grandmother gave to her. She had give birth to a daughter and she planned on giving the jade bracelet to her as a legacy. Fook Kee became a successful person at that time because he had help from Siew May. Mrs. Wong live with Siew May because she was awfully ill.

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